story:breaking_the_line
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| **Genevieve system, Keefe' | **Genevieve system, Keefe' | ||
| - | December 4404\\ | + | **December 4404**\\ |
| - | Galactic Defence League battlegroup 16\\ | + | **Galactic Defence League battlegroup 16** |
| The fleet recon pickets found them at 08:15:23 DCT: a scatter of bright energy signatures over Genevieve IV. Word spread around the fleet in minutes – corpers spotted. | The fleet recon pickets found them at 08:15:23 DCT: a scatter of bright energy signatures over Genevieve IV. Word spread around the fleet in minutes – corpers spotted. | ||
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| **Genevieve IV**\\ | **Genevieve IV**\\ | ||
| - | Superbattleship // | + | **Superbattleship // |
| “Contacts multiple, long range, hostile transponders!”\\ | “Contacts multiple, long range, hostile transponders!”\\ | ||
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| **Thirteen minutes later**\\ | **Thirteen minutes later**\\ | ||
| - | Superbattleship // | + | **Superbattleship // |
| Veyris set down her coffee with trembling hands. On the main display, an intimidating spread of contact icons indicated the enemy fleet – just sitting there in jump-space. Her cold-launched missiles sat comfortingly close to one of the projected entry points, although one maybe-kill out of 46 hostiles wasn't all that comforting.\\ | Veyris set down her coffee with trembling hands. On the main display, an intimidating spread of contact icons indicated the enemy fleet – just sitting there in jump-space. Her cold-launched missiles sat comfortingly close to one of the projected entry points, although one maybe-kill out of 46 hostiles wasn't all that comforting.\\ | ||
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| //Redruth// lazily rolled itself starboard, out of // | //Redruth// lazily rolled itself starboard, out of // | ||
| - | Twenty kilometres away on each side, other “stacks” were dispersing too. //Take That Back// accelerated out from //behind | + | Twenty kilometres away on each side, other “stacks” |
| Greys cleared the ops channel with an understated cough.\\ | Greys cleared the ops channel with an understated cough.\\ | ||
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